“Wishing to float”

I wish to float rather than walk
along with treasure of your lovable talk

when I rest my head against your chest
those moments seem heavenly and best

my desires guarded with your existence
my fantasies enriched with your presence

you are a lovelore engraved in my mind
your soft touches and whispers I always find


you entered in my life like a mystry Unfold
filled my life with joys, everlasting and untold.

Since I wish to floatโ€ฆwish to sweep my feet
dancing in your arms ,listening to your beat 
“Wishing to float” “Wishing to float”

“Wishing to Float” by Seema Gupta is a heartfelt exploration of longing and desire within the context of love. Through simple yet evocative language and imagery, Gupta delves into the speaker’s yearning to transcend the ordinary and mundane aspects of life and be enveloped in the blissful experience of love.

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The central theme of the poem revolves around the transformative power of love. The speaker expresses a deep longing to escape the constraints of everyday life and instead immerse themselves in the warmth and comfort of their beloved’s presence. This longing is captured through the recurring refrain “Wishing to float,” which emphasizes the speaker’s desire for weightlessness and freedom from earthly concerns.

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The imagery employed by Gupta further enhances the emotional depth of the poem. For example, the image of resting one’s head against the beloved’s chest evokes feelings of intimacy, security, and contentment. Similarly, the idea of dancing in the beloved’s arms symbolizes a surrender to love’s embrace, where the mundane fades away and only the joy of connection remains.

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The structure of the poem, with its four stanzas each comprising four lines, lends a sense of symmetry and balance to the piece. The repetition of the refrain serves to reinforce the central theme while also creating a rhythmic cadence that draws the reader in.

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Overall, “Wishing to Float” is a poignant exploration of the longing and desire inherent in love. Through its simplicity of language and imagery, the poem resonates with readers, inviting them to reflect on their own experiences of love and longing.

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